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Looks Aren't Everything by ~wastedxxwishes:iconwastedxxwishes:



Tell me how your bones are hollow and decayed
   how the pale skin that stretches
      oh so gracefully over them,
         Isn't really translucent
But it's really quite good at covering
         Grungy deterioration and rotting decadence

Describe your bruises for me, like elegant accidents,
   like pretty flowers that color your entire canvas
      blooming in a cloudy array over satin white
         Like scattered petals that bleed into it's hollow earth
Bleeding like scarlet nectar and violet venom
         Forget that in reality, I will never resent your pain

Nobody cares about what's under your skin
   Grow me a garden, flourishing like blossoms
      all over your frail and bitterly hollow canvas,
         I don't really care
Like pretty red roses trickling from broken-up veins  
         Let them stem and flow and watch as apathy blooms from mine

Growing and thriving from guilt and anguish
   it forms and fades through your
      not-so-translucent skin after all,
         Skin that can no longer hide it's deterioration;
And when they find your body, when they all gasp in horror
         I'll be sure to remind them that it was meant to be beautiful
:iconwastedxxwishes:

Author's Comments



I've been experimenting with this for awhile now, and I think it's a bit different from my normalcy's, whatever those are;

Soooo what do you think? honestly :]

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:iconunderworldriver:
Just what a true and astonishing buffet of colorful words that portray the meaning so beautifully, that i simply have no words. :heart:

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Wow. Great job! I love the descriptiveness of this piece. There's something ugly and beautiful about this piece, and I LOVE it. Wonderful job!

~*Magpie

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P.S. When I say "ugly" I mean it as a compliment.

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hehe thanks :D

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